Storyline Edit & Correction IBU-MBC

Hallo assalamualaikum i'm Mufid Nastangillah here I will share the results of storyline edits that other groups have made, to fulfill the UAS English conversation assignment.

This is a storyline from a previous project but I found some mistakes in the storyline that other groups made, therefore my group and I edited it to make it a good storyline and used the editing symbols that had been given.

The pictures above are some of the errors in the storyline, and I will provide the correct edits

maybe that's all the editing of the storyline from me and my group, thank you for your attention