Storyline Edit & Correction IBU-MBC

Hallo assalamualaikum i'm Mufid Nastangillah here I will share the results of storyline edits that other groups have made, to fulfill the UAS English conversation assignment.

This is a storyline from a previous project but I found some mistakes in the storyline that other groups made, therefore my group and I edited it to make it a good storyline and used the editing symbols that had been given.




The pictures above are some of the errors in the storyline, and I will provide the correct edits







maybe that's all the editing of the storyline from me and my group, thank you for your attention





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